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Wednesday 18 March 2020

The legendary journey

        “GET UP” Railey yelled to wake up the others “ok ok” they replied “where are we going? again” Jeff asked “we are going on a journey to the North Pole\Antarctica to find the legendary beast” said Railey “OHH YEAH… wait, what I never knew that” Korrdell said “oh yeah I forgot to tell you” Railey said. “Whoosh” went Davlyns blanket flying off from Railey yanking his blanket off “GIVE IT BACK IT IS COLD!!!” Davlyn screenmend “GET UP!” Railey yelled back “ok... don’t need to yell” Davlyn wispeard “WHAT DID YOU SAY” Railey yelled “nothing, how did you hear me?'' Davlyn asked “I hear everything” Railey replied. “Here we go,” Railey said while driving off.

        “Here we go,” Railey said while driving off. “We are here” Railey said while celebrating, “ok legends tell the monster lives in a cave in a tall mountain” Railey said. What is the tallest mountain here?” Railey asked “probably that one over there it looks like it goes to outer space” Davlyn answered. “The snow is too deep for the car it will sink, We need to walk there” Jeff said “we need some gear I have some at the back of the car” said Davlyn. '' Ok then let's go” Wesley said. “It is cold'' Davlyn said “no it isn't” said Railey “yes it is it feels like I am going to freeze to death” Davlyn complained “you just get cold easily” Jeff said “so” Davlyn cried “fine have my beanie” Wesley said while giving it to him “thank you” Davlyn said while shivering.


         “What is that white thing  in the distance?” Jeff asked “where?” Davlyn asked “over there” Jeff said while pointing at the white figure in the snow. “It looks like it is getting bigger,” Said railey “no it is getting closer and it is a polar bear” Wesley screamed “RUN!!!” Davlyn yelled. Railey turned around and grabbed a gun out of his bag “BANG BANG” He shot the polar bear “that was close” Railey said while trying to catch his breath. “Any ways we made it let's start climbing” said Railey “we made it and there is the monster just look at it” said Davlyn  we just need a little bit of it’s blood.” Railey used an injection tool to get it’s blood and ran away.

“We made it, let's not ever do that again” and then they went home.


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