1. I don’t want to do it because it sounds hard.
2. It won't be fair because some other people might not get in.
3. Some people arent aloud to live there
Pros:
1. It is good to look after plants.
2. It might be fun because you get to sleep with animals.
3. It is good to look after animals too.
Kia ora Davlyn,
ReplyDeleteThanks for staying with us during your school holidays and for completing another activity!
Hmmm...for this post it would be nice if you could copy and paste the activity description " Would you like to be a DOC ranger and live with the animals on Great Barrier Island? On your blog list three pros (good things) and three cons (bad things) about working as a DOC ranger. At the bottom of your post, tell us whether you would like to be a DOC Ranger or not.", as this would help your readers to understand what is that you are writing about, otherwise it may be hard to understand your points.
Furthermore, in your Cons list in your first point you wrote that you don't want to be a DOC ranger because is too hard, but that is not part of the Cons but rather your final conclusion and you should right that in a separate sentence at the end of your post and also you need to explain why you think is too hard.
In order for you to gain full points for this activity I will need you to hoop back in here adjust these 2 key points that I mentioned above and let me know by replying to this comment.
You are doing a great job, keep up!
Kia kaha,
Patricia