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Friday 27 July 2018

HORROR COMES KNOCKING ON YOUR DOOR BY TIMOTE, ISAIA AND DAVLYN

One day everything went wrong just a experiment including a nuke  it blew up and it affected the humans but the scientist try to make a formula to cure the human but they accidently made a zombie position and gave everyone that had sickness.

That's how we ended up  in a old house with trap for zombies.After a few days we have to go loot some houses but we got the jackpot it was a rustrent and it might have food but we found a family.We had to build walls and stairs and platform  and we heard knocking on our door but it was one of the zombies so we grabbed our guns i had a scar and mote had a mini gun and we started shooting at them .

After that we took them back to home base one of them were a scientist they ask for materials to make a antidote for the zombies.it took a whole day to make it after we went and tried it and it worded so she made with a little help we cured everyone later on we had to take the family back to  tilted towers.


how do we predict the weather?

weather conditions

what weather is made of

choose-your-own-story plan

Word/master Vocabulary Finder

Artful Artist/illustrator

Wednesday 4 July 2018

Walking narrative



Brainstorm of ideas - sonny day and light dirt.

Describing character/setting - they are walking on light brown dirt on a bright sunny day on a wednesday, they are holding some metal sticks

Ideas for the problem - one of them might trip on a rock that is deep into the ground and broke their leg.

Ideas for the solution - they used aid kit

Start here:
On a sony day me and my mate paula went for a hike first we had to pack our stuff like first aid kit,bange, drink bottle,axe and our bag. When we were about to go we were so excited because this is the first time we did this.

So then they went out and started the walk then they started to run then they stopped for a drink then ran again. Then paula askilenly tripped on a rock that was deep into the ground and broke his leg.

When paula was tripped on the rock and broke his leg i went into my bag and grabbed my aid kit and put the bandages around it. Then I called the ambulance and the ambulance and took him to the hospital.

heaven and hell exist


Timotes part: Malo e lele My name is Timote.We have been learning about hell and heaven.We pick this topic because we want to learn about the diffents of heaven and hell.

Davlyns part: hello my name is davlyn do you no were they are? If you don’t you can ask me. Hell is under us and heaven is above us.

Isaias part: malo e lele my name is isaiah and we have learnt about heaven and hell. Do you know about heaven and hell? Hell was for the devil  and heaven was for angels.

Week 9 and 10

Monday 2 July 2018

WALT how to use dialogue in our writing


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go
At the front of the talking and at the back.
How to put in other punctuation
Put them before the speech marks
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When someone replies
Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs
Responded politely, asked politely, screamed angrily,

EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.“How was your day?” asked Michael.
“It was great, it was fun” replied Lopi.
“Let’s go do fruit Lopi.”
He nodded in reply.

How was your weekend said lopi?”.
It was great I went to my baby cousins birthday”
Replied lopi.

“When are you finished lopi?”.said Michael.
When i’m finished replied lopi.