buddy recount checklist

PLANNING FOR WRITING. INTRODUCTION: WHAT: partner yoga challenge WHERE: inside Room 7 WHEN: Monday 17th September 2018, in the morning, first thing in the morning WHO: Room 7 students WHY: have fun HOW: miss had a slideshow, kids in partners. KEYWORDS Flexible, splits, lift, push, hold yourself up, hold hands, clasp hands, grip, hips, shoulders, balance, fall, collapse, tumble, flattened, PARAGRAPH 1: Roll, got into partners, move the furniture away, Miss explained what we were doing First pose - easy, happy, going to get harder, confused, confident, trust and feel comfortable with partner PARAGRAPH 2: Challenging Making shapes with our bodies Keeping calm, trying your best Which ones did you try AND FAIL? Which ones were really HARD? PARAGRAPH 3: Most complex or difficult poses.. Which ones did you try AND FAIL? Which ones were really HARD? CONCLUSION: My favourite one was.. The hardest one was... On Monday the 17th of September 2018 room 7 did the partner yoga challenge. We did the challenge to have fun, miss put a slideshow on of yoga poses so we can copy them, inside. It was like Miss Ashley was torturing us. First we got in pears and my pear was Maani after that miss explained what we were doing, she put up the first yoga picture and everyone clicked that we were doing yoga and people that was here last year was like “WE DID THIS LAST YEAR”. The first one was easy then it got harder it was challenging. NOT DONE YET Author: Stanley

Checked by: davlyn

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Surface features	Searched	Found	Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence	✓	X	X
Capital ‘I’	✓	X	X
Capital letters for names of places and people	✓	✓	✓
Full stops at the end of a sentence	✓	X	X
Speech marks when people are talking	✓	X	X
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘	✓	X	X
Words are written in past tense	✓	X	X
Connectives - next, then, afterwards	✓	X	X
Interesting and difficult adjectives	✓	X	X
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how	✓	✓	✓
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt	not	done	yet
Ideas/events in the right order	not	done	yet
3 paragraphs	not	done	yet
Metaphors and similes	✓	✓	✓
Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom	✓	X	X
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex	✓	X	X
One thing (name) did well was… he put capital letters at the end of the sentences. One thing (name) need to work on is… do Metaphors and similes